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Amirra by MissLunaRose Amirra by MissLunaRose
I haven't posted a real picture of Amirra since... well... a few days after I joined dA, actually.

For those who don't know, Amirra is my old Mary Sue. She has a lot of "unique" troublesome features, making her unusable as a book character, but I love her anyway. She represents a lot of dear memories to me, and she was the one who really proved that I could write a novel. Her story was over 160,000 words in total before I abandoned it!

She was meant to be twelve at the time of the climax. :giggle: Oh, the things I wrote.

I think I'm improving. :)

...Is it weird that she and Athryl have very similar eye shapes?...

This is one of :iconyeoldedeviations-plz:, so please don't critique it.
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AtlantaTheAristocrat Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Would you mind if I did a redesign of her? I see so much that can be worked with.
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014   General Artist
Go ahead! :heart: I'd be curious to see what you come up with.
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AtlantaTheAristocrat Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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AtlantaTheAristocrat Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you. :)
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Titanium-Alex Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012
Ehem, I apologise for commenting on this AGAIN (I can't stay away from your gallery, plus, this pic seems to make me want to natter. I'll go away if you like...) But do you think there is this weird psychological thing to do with hair? Because I think almost every girl at one point in her life wants beautiful, long flowing hair which is trouble-less and blows in the wind. Like, well, this hair, or the Disney Pocahontas', or something...
I know a sure did (do...)
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012   General Artist
Don't apologize; I like talking to you.

I would agree with that statement. I think a lot of movies and such romanticize very long hair, and it's rare enough to feel special and individualistic. That's probably why I've kept my waist-length curls. I think there's a part of every girl that wants long, gorgeous hair that can blow like that of a Disney princess. :D

Of course, while they might be able to get long, flowing hair, the "trouble-less" part will never happen... unless they want their hair to turn into one big knot. XD
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Titanium-Alex Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
Hehe, indeed. My sister has always favoured short hair, but I like mine long...and I never bother straightening it or anything. (Other girls: Oh no, it's raining, my hair's going to get all curly! Me: Oh no, it's raining, my hair's going to get all...wet.)
I like curly hair x]
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Titanium-Alex Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Waa! She may be a Mary Sue, but she's got awesome hair and magic xD
Reminds me of my old bad story (seriously, it was like the mutated offspring of Lord of the Rings, Star Wars, and various fantasy videogames I've played *shudder*) and the Mary Sues who inhabited it. Again, I feel the same way about it, it was the thing which proved I could FINISH something. The story was 152 Word pages long...the number is forever imprinted into my mind...
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012   General Artist
Thanks! :love:

Ha ha, how old were you when you wrote it? :)
One hundred fifty-two pages is a lot! Amirra's story proved the same thing to me. Her story was a lot like LOTR, too. What a coincidence!
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Titanium-Alex Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
I started it when I was about...*thinking face* Nine..? I filled like, 3 notebooks with it in Year 5 (not sure what that is in American school terms) and then the next year I started writing it all out on the computer...hmm...
And I'm not even mentioning my horrible fanfiction thing based around the character of 'Louise' who could control water and shapeshift into anything, grew up in the wild, fixed up an abandoned barge and lived alone on it with her many pets *shudder* The HORROR!
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Silver13riolu Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student General Artist
I really like her design! (even if she happens to be a mary sue!)
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012   General Artist
Thank you! :D
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Silver13riolu Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012  Student General Artist
:D I love her hair!~
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012   General Artist
Thank you! When I was little, I wanted hair just like hers. :D
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UnbekanntesPferd Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2012
Maybe she should migrate to Anime-Land. There, if you haven't saved the world twice by the time you turn 16, you're doing something wrong.
And I really like her design : )
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2012   General Artist
True.
...Of course, she's supposed to be about eighteen the second time she saves the world, but maybe Anime-Land will present her with some opportunities so she won't be ostracized. :D
Thanks!
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Pheoniic Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Even if she's a mary sue, she's still pretty cool! :dummy: (I really like white hair too)
..She does sort of remind me of Athryl :O

I wish I could say I had a mary sue I could look back on and look fondly at, but basically I took Kaisae and Yaz's original designs and ran them over with a hypothetical steamroller multiple times until their lives were a mess and they never looked the same again.
..Yep I think thats a good analogy for it.
Kaisae's design basically did a nosedive once I decided he was "too perfect" to be a character...
That is, when he was an incarnation of a god or something to that degree.
And Yaz used to be an Emo ice dragon that was afraid of touching everyone.
Yeah...
To be honest I think Sato (saav) has had the smoothest ride as a character.
I might have to Change that sometime. :icondignitylaughplz:
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012   General Artist
Thanks!
I should do a comparison sometime... They have more in common than one would think!

...Sounds like a very author-like thing to do. :lol:

Wow, they've changed a lot!


Waah! No! Don't do anything bad to poor Sato! D:
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BenevolentRose Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I had a Mary Sue once, too! XP Well, I guess I aimed for her to be a Mary Sue? I didn't know what they were, but I aimed to make her the most powerful being in existence but kept not making it there by going 'well, she can't do that; that's a bit much.' Oh, logic.

But she's a very pretty lady. XP I adore her~
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012   General Artist
Oh, wow. :XD: Those always make great memories.
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BenevolentRose Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha, right? XP But looking back we see how we've grown as writers~
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012   General Artist
Indeed. :D
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apples-eye Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
Ahhh, mary sues.. XD

Love the colors in this though, they go so well together. :la:
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012   General Artist
Indeed. :)

Thanks! I feel like I've finally done her magical powers justice; I never could make them the way I imagined them before. :D
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apples-eye Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012
I think you have done them justice, too :D.
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012   General Artist
Thanks. :hug:
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WonHitWonder Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I remember you talking about her! That's a lot of effort to go into a character, I find myself a little inspired. Maybe I should do a pic of one of my old Mary Sues too. It'd certainly be weird to revisit o_o
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012   General Artist
Ha ha, yeah, I used her as a case study in "Extrasuperfabulous." :D I adored her. Great things can happen when you're obsessed enough with a story. XD

You should do it! It's fun to revisit Mary Sues... you get such humorous memories popping up in your head...
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CanisLupusDingo Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012   General Artist
Ahh, the memories of an earlier creative time. Usually I look back at my old pieces (at the time I thought "32 pages :w00t:" was a lot :no: ) and shudder. I only grew attached to my later characters.
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012   General Artist
Indeed. (I did too!) We all had to start somewhere... :D
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CanisLupusDingo Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012   General Artist
True, true...
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Lady-CrusaderKira Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Huh. :) Very cool! No worries, Luna. Most of us have an old OC tucked away that is more Sue than not. :) For what it's worth, I think she looks really cool! :)
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012   General Artist
Thanks! :hug:
Yeah, I'd agree with that.
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Lady-CrusaderKira Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ja. :)
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Hee. I should see if any of my truly archaic things have survived...
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012   General Artist
You should! :D
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Lady-CrusaderKira Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:)


There's one poem in particular that I absolutely love--which is really mind-blowing, considering that it's mine--And I just really really hope that I can find it somewhere and put it up here. :) I'm sure I have a paper copy, if only I knew where to look... ^ ^"""
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2012   General Artist
Oh, awesome! I hope you find it.

I need to go through that deviation stack of yours again... :}
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Lady-CrusaderKira Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I did! >:} It's in my Poetry collection. :dance:


Hurray!
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Werewolf9098 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
...words can't express how BEAUTIFUL she looks in this picture!
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012   General Artist
Thank you! :tighthug:
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Werewolf9098 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
*suffocating* :XD:
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Guardy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The funny thing is that she doesn't really look like a sue - except for the long, flowing white-ish hair (but, hey I like hair like that
I like the staff and the glowing thing - looks pretty cool.
You also did an awesome job on the shading.
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012   General Artist
Thanks! Ha ha, yeah, besides the hair, she looks like a fairly average little girl. It's just the fact that she's saving Highcliff at her age... ;P
Severin has beautiful hair. :D

Thank you! :hug:
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toarwma Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
she is great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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MissLunaRose Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012   General Artist
Thank you! :glomp:
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toarwma Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
my pleasureeeee ^^
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